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Illidan Ryer

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(7/26/06 11:12 pm)
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Allan Sharr [Complete - Comments Welcome]
Player's Name: Chris
E-Mail: LimeOfDoom@gmail.com
Other means of Contact: G-Talk: LimeOfDoom@Gmail.com





Name: Allan Sharr
Nickname: None
Code Name: Azure
Affiliation: X-Men
Gender: Male
Age: 17
Birthday: December 6
Hair: Azure
Eyes: Blue/Gray
Mother: Nancy Sharr, made up, living.
Father: Severin Sharr , made up, deceased

Physical Description:

Allan is 6 feet and 2 inches and weights 170 pounds. His movements are fluid and poised, he walks with authority and pride, although when depressed it radiates from his whole body, he slouches and shuffles. His clothing is unique, like in the picture, he enjoys coming up with odd but nice looking outfits.

Powers:
Allan possesses a photographic memory as well as excellent problem solving skill.

His actual powers is that he can secrete an azure colored liquid from any of his pores that can take the shape of anything he desires, however, if he does not know the inner workings of what he is making, it will only look like what he wants, not work like it and the more he knows and understands the higher the quality. For instance if he doesn’t understand a computer he cannot make a computer, only something that looks like one. Also, if he is making something simple, like a sword, knowing how the specific metal used to make it was made it will be even stronger, or if he knows of a technique that makes weapons sharper and harder to dull, his weapon would be sharper and harder to dull. There is one exception to this rule, a hover board, the first thing he ever created. The more complicated something is, however, the longer it takes to finish IE: A simple butter knife might take a moment, but a cell phone takes an hour. Because Allan’s power is rooted partially in his subconscious it acts as an automatic defense system, if Allan is about to be punched in the face the liquid will rise instantly to protect him, eventually, with practice, Allan will be able to make it so that the liquid forms into metal or something simple like stone, so that it is even more effective.

Allan has been practicing with his hover board, which tops out at 65 mph, all his life. The hover board is pretty resilliant, it can handle a crash at 65 mph, although it's rider may not, it is controlled by Allan's mind since it was created by his subconcious. It can only go as high or as fast as it's rider can handle since it can read Allan's mind and thus know Allan's vitals.



History:
Allan was born to wealthy parents who were just rising in the business world of nanotechnology and as such, didn’t have time to raise a child, or notice his oddities, like the strange liquid that would get caught in the drain, they just hired someone to watch and teach him and someone else to unclog the drain. The servants became Allan’s true family while his parents were just people who stopped in to say, “Hi, I love you,” every now and then. Allan was never allowed outside of the house because of the possibility for kidnap and ransom so he never realized just how strange his life was.

One cold snowy day in early December, Allan’s fifth birthday, his parent succeeded in closing a multi-billion dollar deal that ensured their financial well being as well as Allan’s and his children’s and their children’s and their children’s and so on. Overwhelmed with joy they celebrated, drinking champagne and having a good time, as well they should, they earned it, however, in the middle of an impromptu dance Allan walked out and his mother tripped over him, an empty champagne bottle crashing on Allan’s head, the glass shattered and Allan was knocked out, but otherwise unharmed, however, a strange blue liquid was quickly drying on the shards of glass, and when they looked at Allan’s hair it had turned from brown to an azure color. Frightened his parents went to the internet, leaving Allan alone amongst the shards of glass. When they couldn’t find anything even remotely similar having happened to anyone other than mutants they become distraught. What would this mean for their business; they decided no one must know. They used their influence to make sure everyone in the world believed azure was Allan’s natural hair color and even convinced Allan of it.

Fear and suspicion began to rule the lives of Nancy and Severin, afraid that it seemed odd that a now ten year old Allan was still not in some prodigious school. So they sent him off to an exclusive school for the gifted, which Allan was. His photographic memory and problem solving skills made him a favorite with the teachers and Allan’s naturally humorous attitude made him some close friends at school; however Allan held no respect for the people who claimed to be his family. He disobeyed them often, rarely talked to them about anything at all. He ate in the kitchen with the chefs. It was becoming problematic for his parents, they thought he might tell them about his being a mutant, so they fired all the servants and hired new ones; they forbade them from speaking with Allan and arranged to have him live in the dorms at his school. Allan’s closest friend on the staff was his personal trainer/kung-fu sensei, they would talk about everything, but Allan was too afraid of his gifts to tell even his trainer. The trainer was fired last, however, Allan knew he was going to be fired, and for the last week couldn’t even look at him without crying. Enraged by this Allan cut out contact with his parents all together. Eventually Allan settled in and forgot his parents, but kept in contact with his family of former servants, they visited him at holidays and had parties on his birthdays, until Allan turned 15 and was sent off to prep school, it was in New York and the servants just couldn’t take the time off required to visit him, so Allan got closer with his friends, got interested in girls and so on. Hiding the pain of separation inside, where it bubbled and festered and just waited to get out. One day it did, Allan, now 16, had just asked a girl to ‘go steady’ with him and she had agreed, everything pent up inside of his burst out of him and said he loved her, she was taken aback but smiled and, well, Allan enjoyed his first truly sleepless night.

Shortly after Allan turned seventeen he was approached by a man offering him the two things he ached for, people who understood and could help with his unique abilities, and a family. It was too much for Allan too turn down so he said good-bye to his friends, including his steady, and prepared to go to the Xavier Institute.


Personality: Pretty typical teenage guy, jokes a lot, doesn’t take things seriously, always tries to get the last word. Looking for any chance to make a joke or get ‘lucky’. Of course he also has his share of problems and often times keeps the pain inside until it builds to a burst of emotion, this burst can range anywhere from joy to rage, it depends on the circumstances. Allan does joke more than is normal, and usually tries to write off his mistakes as jokes. When Allan is faced with his own mistakes or if he gets in trouble he tries to make up an excuse. Allan has a love of learning in all its forms, in fact, the only time Allan doesn’t mind making mistakes is when it comes to his education. Allan enjoys all forms of self-expression; however he keeps his love of poetry quiet because he thinks it might compromise his image.


Likes: Friends, acceptance, girls, learning, martial arts, guitar/bass, music, girls, cooking, sneaking out to go drinking, girls and secretly, poetry.


Dislikes: Bullies, the idea of blood making you family, people who flaunt their ignorance like it is knowledge.


RP Sample: I read somewhere you only have to do one for your first character, right?

As a note, I ended Allan's bio with him on his way to the school, as such, his relationship with his friends from his former school has yet to be played out. I intend to do a thread about his former friends once I feel Allan has found a foot hold at Xavier's.



I'm a puppet not a whore!

Edited by: Illidan Ryer at: 8/7/06 3:15 am
HankMcCoy13

Henry ‘ Hank’ McCoy
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The Intellectual Feline


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(8/4/06 3:33 am)
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Re: Allan Sharr [Complete - Comments Welcome]
Ok description.. the photo, while cute isnt enough Give us some idea of his dress seense his voice and he way he moves.Bio... gosh its late but... what about girlies! Hey hes cute... And if possible give me some line of business his folks made their fortune in......

and emmm its mega late... hope this helps Watch this space for further comments
:D

Edited by: HankMcCoy13 at: 8/4/06 3:37 am
Illidan Ryer

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(8/4/06 9:09 pm)
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Re: Allan Sharr [Complete - Comments Welcome]
The above issues were adressed, although there was already a mention of Allan's girl-friend.

Quote:
Allan was born to wealthy parents who were just rising in the business world of nanotechnology



I'm a puppet not a whore!

Edited by: Illidan Ryer at: 8/6/06 1:06 am
o Logan Howlett o



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(8/6/06 12:09 am)
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Re: Allan Sharr [Complete - Comments Welcome]
ok .. on the girlfriend front.... he was close to her... where did he meet her.... does he keep in touch despite having moved to xaviers... or when you say he says goodbye is it a clean break? how involved were they really........... i mean is he in love??

And i still dont know know what type of business his folks are in.... do they sell computer chips... arms...... breakfast cereals......only being pedantic because i believe you mentioned that it may be important later down the line.....Otherwise i have no major problems..... what dod the rest of you guys think


Ohhhhh and some ides of what the hover board lets him do please.



There's just somethin' wild inside me pullin' me to do things I don't understand.
I can't figure it. It's like tryin' to explai
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Edited by: o Logan Howlett o at: 8/6/06 12:11 am
gunfielddan

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(8/6/06 12:23 am)
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Re: Allan Sharr [Complete - Comments Welcome]
*stares at ann* perhaps it allows him to hover :evil *runs and hides from her wrath*

Illidan Ryer

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(8/6/06 6:44 pm)
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Re: Allan Sharr [Complete - Comments Welcome]
Edited.



I'm a puppet not a whore!

Fengal

Michael Grant
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(8/7/06 12:33 am)
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Re: Allan Sharr [Complete - Comments Welcome]
ahhhhh nanotechnology..... it was sooo small i didnt notice it.:o

And ok I have no major problems with explaining his previous recent relationships in a postie.. does anyone else?

As for the hoverboard... if he Chris decides he can fly to the moon on it it will be your fault Dan:D

Anyway as I say.. no major problems this end so.... Stamp!

Forgotten Love


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(8/7/06 2:35 am)
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Re: Allan Sharr [Complete - Comments Welcome]
You will need to explain the boards benefits and restrictions, technology is still a power and we still gotta make sure that it's not abused. How durable, how high, does it need recharging, that sort of stuff.

Other then that, the physical description of your character is still rather basic buuuut I'll not push too much for more details. Just remember to give more details on the hoer board please.

-stamp-

Edited by: Forgotten Love at: 8/7/06 2:47 am
Illidan Ryer

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(8/7/06 3:15 am)
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Re: Allan Sharr [Complete - Comments Welcome]
Edited in more details on the hover board.



I'm a puppet not a whore!

0x Tempest x0

Posts: 1804
(8/16/06 1:11 am)
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Re: Allan Sharr [Complete - Comments Welcome]
*sneaks in* ... note that you've got two stamps so you can assume the char's accepted. Please reply here stating you know that's the case and the bio will be moved into the respective section ^^


Memories consume
Like opening the wound
You all assume
I'm safe here in my room

I don't want to be the one
The battles always choose
'Cause inside I realize
That I'm the one confused

I don't know what's worth fighting for
Or why I have to scream
I don't know why I instigate
And say what I don't mean

I try to catch my breath again
I hurt much more
Than anytime before
I had no options left again

I'll paint it on the walls
'Cause I'm the one at fault
I'll never fight again
And this is how it ends

So I'm breaking the habit tonight
And so she bowed to what she thought was fate

and neglected the last of humanity's ancient lies

Illidan Ryer

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(8/16/06 1:11 am)
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Re: Allan Sharr [Complete - Comments Welcome]
Oh, yeah I know, I posted with him and everything.



I'm a puppet not a whore!

Illidan Ryer

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(10/18/06 3:44 pm)
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Re: Allan Sharr [Complete - Comments Welcome]
o.O Is poor Allan on review or something?

Or is the adminz being t3h tres lazy?:evil



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