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Despair Incarnate

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(11/11/05 1:43 am)
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Bolvaark
well, its only taken me about six months to actually finish this damn thing... been through more changes than i can count lol.. oh well over to you guys to tell me what i've done wrong this time

hmm, version 3... every time i look i find something missing lol
oh and if there's any complaints about the powers i'm blaming Ann... she made me add more *acts as if he was forced into it*




Name: Bolvaark

Human Name: Karl Voba (only used outside of A Corp, as no one outside knows that the two are one and the same)

Nickname/s: nothing repeatable

Approximate age: looks late 30’s to early 40's

Race: Demon

Occupation: Lawyer

Affiliation: A Corp.

Description:
At about five foot eight he is not very tall, but his size and stature are deceiving for he is actually a very strong individual. Bolvaark has Dark hair and dark eyes. His general facial expression is as calm and emotionless, he is also keen on an angered expression too. His voice also is slow and calm, with just a hint of hatred when raised, for special occasions he might employ an evil laugh… something he has perfected over the years.

Bolvaark’s wardrobe is possibly the most boring one in the world as he only ever wears one thing… suits, not that he hasn’t worn anything else, his wardrobe tends to change with the times, now it is suits, mainly black one’s, and he makes sure he has the right accessories, tie pins, cufflinks and occasionally sunglasses to complete the look. The black however is sometimes omitted in favour of a dark green or brown suit, but the rest normally stays the same

His demon form is not much taller than his human form, basically he appears as a fiery energy in the rough shape of a human. Although this form looks like fire, its not really and consequently he cannot burn people, however it is not damaged by heat.

Powers/Skills:
Bolvaark has two forms, a demon form and a human, for although he is purely demon he has to shroud himself if he is to achieve what he believes he was created for. The human form is expendable, if damaged or destroyed it can be ‘re-grown’. The re-growth process is a simple one, in demon form bolvaark forms a sort of chrysalis around himself and regenerates… but this takes time and a lot of energy, at which point he becomes susceptible to attack as he cannot fight back**

Unable to feel pain due to the lack a of nervous system Bolvaark is a formidable opponent in battle as he will keep fighting until he is unable to move any more as he cannot tell whether or not he is damaged and would continue fighting with only a few limbs attached. (In theory he would probably be reduced to flailing around helplessly)

His very existence seems to exude an ‘aura of despair’, affecting mainly those without demonic blood it is not normally enough to make them chronically depressed, just uneasy enough to distract them from any fighting they may be engaged in by forcing them to become disheartened, distressed or upset to a degree… also good for tormenting prisoners and gaining valuable information.

The actual effect of this varies from person to person though there are few who are totally unaffected, for example if the person was easily upset anyway then they could start crying, lash out at their friends or just give up, whereas if they are not that easily upset, are criminally insane or evil then they would probably not be too bothered by it, just a little off edge for a while. The effect of this ‘power’ will always be felt whilst bolvaark is in the vicinity, once he leaves it lasts only for a short while as it fades away and the victim returns to normal… if they survived him that is.

Although he is not the fastest creature in the world he is a lot swifter moving than a normal average human, but not to the extent that it could be considered a mutation, just the result of hard training and practice like an athlete.

Strong too for his size he can overpower a larger opponent than himself or beat his way through a door that dared to get in his way, though in this case it would not be his strength but the fact that he couldn’t feel the pain of hitting the solid surface hard multiple times. There are limits however as most doors or walls are thick enough to stop him sticking his fist through no matter how many times he hit them… though he would give it a good try. Also if he did manage to break through a door or wall his hand, foot or whatever part of his body he used would probably be severely damaged and wouldn’t work properly not that he cares that much. (Would just like to point out that most men can kick down a wooden door with enough effort, but from experience I try to avoid doing so as it kinda hurts)

Bolvaark is very good in the field of law, something which he studied at great length after joining A corp. his main reason for becoming a lawer was that the law had potential to be twisted around to make peoples life a living hell, something the demon is exceedingly fond of, swinging a few things here and there, getting charges dropped and people instantly owe you something... get a blind eye turned to some nightime activities and the suchlike. whilst working in the courtroom he discovered that his ability to cause unhappiness and despair has on many occasions swung a case the way of A corp.’s way, as witnesses suddenly became unable to testify due to them bursting into tears and running off, getting angry for no apparent reason, or even the accused or accuser doing the same… it was a very helpful tool for him on occasions like these, he’s even made a few people confess to things they never even did, just because they became so disorientated by it that they ended up agreeing to anything, but this is a rare occurrence.

Being many years old and involved with people like A corp he has learnt a bit of magic over the years, but only bothered with things like shields, barriers and energy blasts and these he rarely uses except against more powerful foes.

Energy blasts: title pretty much sums it up, magical energy sent flying towards an opponent like an unguided missile, the impact of which usually sending the opponent flying. Each blast drains the users energy, so after a while they get less powerful and eventually he cant create any more.

Shield: self explanatory, but he cant shield against everything and the shields do break down under constant barrage as they drain Bolvaarks energy the longer they are in use and the more blows they deflect (has nothing against physical blows like punches only against magical… and bullets)


Shimmering: a form of teleportation used by demons and half-breeds to move from one place to another pretty much instantly, Bolvaark disappears and reappears slowly at his destination with a sort of watery, shimmery effect as he arrives and leaves (hence the name ‘shimmering’). Due to under practice of this power in earlier years and his time as a statue however his range is quite limited, and he would point blank refuse to use this power to run from a fight… no matter how badly he seemed to be loosing.

Alternate aura
Bolvaark has the ability to use the aura of despair as a directed ‘weapon’, concentrating on an individual person. Instead of affecting everyone it will only affect those whom he chooses It is also much stronger, instead of being a feeling of uneasiness it creates an invisible aura around them which drains the victim of hope, As before the results of this vary depending on the person but in the case of an average human it usually ends up with them feeling depressed, desperate, miserable or maybe all of these to a suicidal extent as instead of just making them feel just a little down it causes hallucinations of whatever will cause them the most despair or anguish eventually driving them over the edge into insanity, suicide or homicide etc.

Once more the affects of this wear off once he has turned his attention to someone or something else or they get ‘out of range’ (a point where he no longer knows their whereabouts, hiding behind a box would not be enough as he can still isolate them sufficiently) but it takes a while longer for the feeling to fade, also if the have been subjected to this power for a long period of time, in for example a torture situation the effects can become irreversible (madness/suicide).

Whilst using this directed power in a one on one situation Bolvaark can 'look in' on what he is doing, see what the victim is imagining at the time, and whilst he cannot use his power to manipulate their vision, being a sadistic creature he does enjoy watching their suffering... better than the cinema. it also means that once the vision is over he can refer to it in conversation, aiding in the convincing that the imaginary event actually happened.

WEAKNESSES
Even though he does not feel any pain he does have his weaknesses, though he does not feel physical attacks this can in fact become weakness as he has no idea of the condition of his body and consequently cannot know when to call it quits and run before getting killed or dismembered.

Bolvaark is very susceptible to psychic or mental powers. Another drawback is that psychics or those with any foresight, or second sight capabilities do not see him as just his human form, instead they would see a kind of fiery energy in the shape of his human form (what he really looks like), a major blow if he’s trying to act inconspicuous or hide (not that he would hide, its not his style)

Certain people would not be affected at all by his normal aura, mainly those who have little hope left anyway (as they deal with it every day) or those who have a high proportion of demon blood in them as his power seems isolated to humans and weaker half breeds only. These however would still be affected by his directed power, but to a much lesser extent… who knows they may even survive

**Although Bolvaark has two forms at the moment he is stuck in the human form and cannot change from one to the other... this makes him quite an easy target in comparison to before as if his human body is severely damaged he cannot change forms and regenerate… he is even unsure himself as to whether or not his demon form would die with the human at the moment. (The reason he is stuck will become clearer farther on in the history)


Mother: none

Father: none

Personality:
Bolvaark lives to cause misery and despair, it is all he knows and he finds a momentary enjoyment from every person he makes miserable, but this is usually short lived making him crave the enjoyment more and more each time. Though he is a sadistic individual he is quite calm and clinical about everything he does, except for when something has really wound him up, then he turns into an irrational and explosive character, his fighting and tormenting then becomes more intense and he may make mistakes… and this is his weakness. There is only one real way to make him become this angry however, and that is to not give in to his tormenting, to carry on without purpose… or to refuse to die no matter what he does.

Bolvaark does not experience any emotions apart from Anger and Hatred, he feels no fear, love, compassion or mercy for anything or anyone… there are certain people who he respects though and these he would consider as friends, everyone else is an enemy to him.

It seems his sole reason for existing is to cause misery and crush hope, leading eventually to the downfall of humanity, even though this may not be achievable in the near future by himself alone… All he desires in this world is to bring purpose to it… even if that purpose were the extermination of everyone in it, for that is what he believe is his purpose.


Likes:
Other people’s pain, fear and the power he has over them when causing these. Watching people destroy themselves, or each other, and the perverse pleasure he gets from every time he kills a human

Dislikes:
Most obviously he has an intense hatred for humanity, other than that he hates killing people with guns because they don’t have the same ‘personal touch’ as ripping someone’s head off, not that it would stop him using one, just not for the final kill. And he also dislikes people talking down to him… or just to him in general. One final pet hate is of holy types, not just people who believe in God, more heavenly beings and creatures with a holy presence… they are another on his hit list, but the humans can go first

History:

The exact details of his creation are unknown… even to him as he has been around since time began, albeit mostly in a non corporeal form. Though many speculate that he is a creature born of despair within the hearts of mortals, something that has been around since the dawn of time and that his creation into a solid entity could have been the by-product of another event which caused great happiness, playing on the theory that every action has an equal and opposite reaction… therefore Bolvaark is the reaction, an accidental anomaly. And while he himself knows of this theory he would rather believe that it was destiny and that he was created by the powers that be to destroy the world and everything in it.

He first ‘appeared’ in North Africa near a rather startled tribe. Naturally he started life in his demon form and as of such the tribesmen were mostly terrified and attempted to send him back from whence he came… rather unsuccessfully. His first impression of humanity therefore was not a good one, but people you’ve never met trying to chop your head off rarely do give a good impression, and this is one of the main reasons behind his hatred for the race (apart for the thinking that they are worthless scum). But at this first meting he discovered his human form by complete accident and for no apparent reason... changing forms whilst dispatching these inferior beings, a thing he was not wholly impressed about as he also discovered that the human form was much weaker.

His first few years passed relatively uneventfully, he didn’t really need to test his powers that much as when he was created they were all at their peak anyway and he knew how to use them to good effect after his first encounter with humanity. At this time he did not use his human form, Instead he chose to roam the world and terrorise villagers removing the most worthless humans from existence, the by-product of this was the development of his reputation for brutality and cruelty that would eventually become known and feared the world over amongst those who knew of the demonic entities that crawled the night, humans meerly knew of sudden unexplaied dissapearences of people, cattle even vilages. In these few years he traversed his way out of Africa and towards Europe, following trade routes of the time.

Soon, via experimentation he realised that it became much more amusing and easier for him if he passed himself off as human, for although his power was not as great he could affect a lot more people and he could move around and kill relatively unnoticed during daylight hours meaning that he could toy with his victims more, he could watch the misery he caused as he broke families apart just by being nearby… a lot. But even this was not enough for him, though torturing locals was amusing for a while, killing only the worthless and weak soon became tiresome, for whilst every kill was important it felt as if there was more that he could be doing to achieve his goal of total annihilation.

Around the late 1500’s Bolvaark roamed across the French countryside destroying villages in his wake, killing anyone he found alive and burning houses. In one incident villagers fled from the destruction of their homes, taking shelter in the church, believing the sacred place to be a sanctuary from evil, but Bolvaark did not care for sanctuaries. Setting the building alight he stalked the graveyard and by the flickering light of the burning church he slaughtered anyone he found alive outside. It is said in legend that the screams of those burning inside could be heard for miles around.

Not even content with the destruction and misery he was causing he sought out farther means to causing chaos across Europe, Africa, and Asia, all the while leaving a trail of destruction and death behind him. Soon the name Bolvaark became common knowledge amongst demons and thier enemies, and many demon hunters tried their luck at killing this new evil before it could do any more damage, but many of them searched in vain, for he was too clever to reveal his human identity… and those who did manage to catch up with the demon were unprepared or far too cocky and met their end in a very painful and miserable way.

As the body count rose he attracted the attention of the watchers council, for although they had heard of him before through rumour and legend There was little information on who he actually was and what he was capable of, but the occasional survivor was able to talk and stories of his blatant disregard for human life eventually became widespread across the globe… speculations grew as to where he was, but they were too busy looking for a demon to notice the quiet menace that lurked amongst them during the daylight hours, killing mercilessly and disappearing without trace.

Cropping up throughout history whenever something bad happened on a widespread scale he always seemed to be in the thick of it, revelling in the destruction, death or misery around him... and dishing out a fair bit of it himself, he thrives in situations of war, disease and famine as he seems to feed off the misery around. A good example of this is during the great plague, it is said in many accounts that a man shrouded in flame roamed the streets spreading the disease as he went... and these accounts come from all across Europe, though many of them were hushed up so as not to cause too much hysteria.

All the while the files on Bolvaark grew, but no one ever knew that the demon had a human form for this he kept secret, and anyone who saw him change from one to the other lived not to tell the tale. So he was able to go about during daylight hours in complete peace and blend in with the locals, though he tended to dress like the wealthier element rather than poorer people.

For several hundred years he carried on this relentless slaughter, but as the world changed and communication between towns and countries grew it became impractical to destroy a whole village as nearby towns soon discovered it and a major witch-hunt ensued. The last time he did a whole village his human form was discovered and he was overwhelmed and captured. Sentenced to burn at the stake he escaped when the fire burnt through the ropes that tied him down, and as he was alight no one dared to touch him, assuming that he was just going to die anyway.

Surviving by changing into his demon form he realised that he would have to give up the mass slaughter and opt for something more inconspicuous, and that he would need a different disguise as his current one had been discovered and all but destroyed.

Shedding his human form Bolvaark spent several months hiding out in a ruined church until his human appearance was healed. It is this appearance that he has still today, for after being destroyed once he was not inclined to have it done again. Reappearing in the world Bolvaark once more travelled, picking off humans here and there as he went, eventually crossing the oceans to America to continue his terror, it was here that he took the human name Karl Voba by rearranging the letters of his demon name.

It was on his tour of destruction across America when Bolvaark came upon the young half demon Cole. Unlike the many other half breeds he had encountered Bolvaark sensed a great power within the youngster, it was this alone which stopped him from destroying the half breed as he had done a thousand times before, this youngster clearly had a greater purpose in the world. Over the space of a month Bolvaark found himself strangely drawn to the youngster, he found himself going to places for reasons that would not normally draw his attention to them he bumped into or passed Cole on the way.

Initially he dismissed this as just a chance meeting, but soon he believed that it was happening for a reason. Observing the half breed for a while he noted that the youngster clearly didn’t have full usage of his powers, but it was also clear that other demons were disgusted by him and as of such he had no one to teach him. It was a decision that could not be taken lightly, the boy would interrupt his campaign of slaughter, his purpose… but there was always the idea that Cole was his purpose, why else would he be drawn to him in such a way.

In the end the decision was an easy one for the emotionless demon, the boy might actually have his uses to Bolvaark if he did help him out and if not he would only lose a few years, and if he trained him to his own ideals it would be another force to aid his extermination of humanity.

At first it was clear that Cole wanted as little as possible to do with a demon that went around killing pretty much anyone and everyone, including other demons, but after a while he obviously realised that no one else was willing to associate with a half breed, and promptly agreed to let Bolvaark train him in the dark arts.

Under his tuition the youngster grew more powerful though occasionally his human side got the better of him in the first few years of training, his conscience stopping him from doing what was necessary… it was a fault that Bolvaark had to work on. The perfect opportunity came when Cole fell in love with a witch, naturally the older demon was unimpressed and warned the half bred that the witch would betray him, but left it at that for the time being… after all when it went sour as it would inevitably do his point would be reinforced. Sure enough when she found out who Cole really was she tried to vanquish him, point proved.

Eventually deciding to go alone Cole was ambushed and lost some of his demonic abilities, this was unknown to Bolvaark, who was spending his time in south America becoming ‘acquainted’ with the locals, but eventually word reached him of his former pupil’s position, relationship with an angel… and children. Returning to Cole the demon expressed his anger at the situation, after all that had happened with the witch Cole had just gone and done the same thing again.

Using this as his main example he drove the point relentlessly home at every opportunity, reminding Cole of his responsibilities as a demon, they were after all at war with her kind. He warned that she could be manipulating him so as to weaken his position before he turned and vanquished him to gain favour with higher powers, and eventually Cole saw sense and dealt with the situation.

But as for the children… that was a more difficult matter, Cole was quite attached to them, but Bolvaark knew that they would be a problem to the both of them if they stayed with Cole, and deep inside the half bred probably knew the same. Vanquishing them was definitely off the cards as not even the emotionless demon would bring himself to do it, and if anyone tried Cole would make short work of them. The other option that was available was to exile them to another dimension, where their lineage would not be known, after all no angels would give them the time of day because of their demon blood, demons would kill them for their angelic blood so sending them away was in their best interests really, and he advised Cole of this, using Cole’s own experience as a youngster as an example of how demons react to half breeds. Once more it was up to Cole to make the decision.

When Cole joined A.Corp Karl followed suit, the company’s connections in the demon world were good and could benefit him greatly, their resources might prove invaluable to his cause, and the fact that they were run by humans at the time did not sway him from this decision… that fault cold be rectified soon enough.

When inside the organisation he waited for the opportunity to arise that would allow his to rid the place of the human scourge that plagued its halls, and when it came he was not the only one to see it. Along with Cole and the other demons in the group they took over from the ruling council, things were turning out nicely to plan.

Whilst part of A. Corp Karl studied greatly in the field of law, his interest generated by the possibilities of making peoples life hell in yet another way, getting his enemies imprisoned for crimes they didn’t commit, or covering up of his own activities. He became a well known lawyer, one of the best, his skills at making people miserable and forcing fake confessions being extremely useful in furthering his career, and if he failed in court he would seek out his opposite number and pay them a visit after work hours.

After Cole fought and destroyed Imowen and was made obsidian tech advisor, he took Karl as his second, But the demon’s life was becoming more and more awkward, his reputation for brutality was growing and there were always demon hunters tying their luck against him, the Watchers council and slayer had stepped up efforts to stop him and in his demon form he was regularly fending off attacks from their allies, and a lesser known group of demon hunters and religious types. Luckily they had no idea of his human guise, but they were coming ever closer to discovering his true identity and if anyone was able to pin a few horrific murders on Karl then they would implicate both A. Corp and Cole, damaging their reputation and his own was not something he wanted to risk.

Against his best instincts Karl decided that the best course of action was to leave and go into hiding, even though Cole had also expressed his opinions on the situation and dismissed the thought that an organisation of priests and demon hunters would do anything against A. Corp. But Bolvaark was such a huge thorn in anyone’s side they might have tried to remove him. Deciding to head back to Africa where he could hide out in the desert Bolvaark intended to stay his hand on the journey, and not kill anyone until it was safe for him to re-emerge.

Unfortunately it was something that he couldn’t do, on the ship crossing the demon found it necessary to execute the crew and passengers for being worthless and without a purpose in the world. When he reached Africa a ship full of dead people left a huge clue to would be assailants as to his whereabouts, soon he had experienced demon hunters on his tail and about a week into his hiding he was discovered and attacked.

Even though the hunters did not know his human identity they did know that he had a human form, and that the last time Bolvaark was discovered he shed the human form to survive, so they designed a binding spell to stop him changing to his demon form and therefore they would hopefully be able to kill the human taking the demon along with him.

Using a revealing spell on him whilst in demon form he was turned back into his human form, and with him refusing to shimmer to safety a combination of magical and physical attacks managed to weaken him and block his energy blasts enough to cast the binding spell upon him. Unable to destroy him outright they settled for turning him to stone, taking his ‘statue’ away and burying it in a deserted village in the middle of nowhere, spells were cast upon the site to stop any would-be rescue attempts and a guard was set up.

Hearing of his downfall Cole sent out a party to find the demon, but for a long time they came up with nothing, the Priests had hidden it well. Eventually they discovered the deserted village, dispatched the guards and removed all the spells, before digging up the statue remains of Bolvaark. Unable to break the spell and turn him back on the spot, they brought it back with them, and were attacked a couple of times en-route.

Within the vaults of A corp sorcerers worked round the clock to break the spell, over the period of three weeks until finally Bolvaark was released from his stony tomb.. a little worse for wear. Severely weakened from the fighting and his entombment it took a long time for him to readjust and repair his human form, all the while hidden from the world to keep him safe in his weakened state, the binding spell still active and preventing him from changing forms

Nearly back to full strength he was reinstated at Cole’s side, his sights were set back on course for world destruction, with a little vendetta on the side for those who dared to imprison him, their deaths would be slow and torturous


Sample post

(Man I hate these)
The icy wind flicked through the darkened alleyway, litter dancing in its flow and playfully Flitting around the two men’s legs “Why do you insist on meeting in this place” the taller man pulled his jacket closer around him in an attempt to keep out the chill, the other merely glanced slowly towards him, his tie flicked around as if the wind was trying to remove it from around his neck, hindered only slightly by the silver pin holding it in place. “do you have what I want… or not?” his slow drawl showed no feeling unlike the taller man, whose voice showed a hint of fear mixed with shivering. But that was understandable, most people who knew Bolvaark were afraid, and the weather of late had taken a cold turn… as if the demon were affecting that too.

“yea, but it wasn’t easy.. I had to call in a few favours, if you know what I mean” the taller man gestured towards one end of the alley to a van waiting just at the mouth, his deformed face betraying that he was actually a vampire, he’d only really known who bolvaark actually was for a few weeks… but that was normally enough for anyone to be afraid of him. “if it was not you this would have cost double… you got my money” a half smile passed across Bolvaarks face, he did like the power he held over these menial servants. “I think you’ll find its all there” he lifted a small black briefcase with steel edging towards the man “unless you do not trust me… feel free to check” the man smiled “nah, that’s ok man I trust you” trust didn’t come into this…it was more like he didn’t dare check in front of the demon, for the consequences would not be worth thinking about, apart from being a violent sadist Bolvaark was good friends and partner with Cole, and the vampire owed A. Corp

the Vampire gingerly reached out and took the briefcase from his hand as the van slowly reversed down the alleyway, not really paying attention to the small red light flashing near the handle. Brushing against a dustbin, the lid fell off and clanged against the ground loudly, something that would have drawn some deal of attention from the flats above if it were not for the wind howling through the city, Bolvaark looked out of place in cold weather… his suit was not the warmest collection of garments around but his body had no feeling so he was not bothered by the cold.

As the van pulled up the back doors swung open revealing two shadowy figures dressed in black, their faces covered with scarves, lying on the floor between them it was possible to make out the body of another man, he was a Priest, it was clear from his clothing, though his robes were all tattered now. “he’s all yours” the tall man dragged the body from the van and threw him on the floor at Bolvaark’s feet “enjoy” stepping up into the van the two masked men shut the doors behind him and the van slowly moved off.

An evil smile passed across the demons lips, soon disappearing into his emotionless glare “well well…” bending down he lifted the Priest one handed as if to bring him to his feet, instead the mans legs dangled loosely on the floor… he hadn’t the energy to stand now after being dragged from his home and bundled into the back of a van before being beaten and dumped here “we meet again… only this time things will go a little differently” his slow voice was usually enough to make someone’s day miserable… but that was not the reason he had gone to such great lengths to obtain this Man, he was one of those who bound his demon form, who turned him to stone for the best part of a decade…

“We need to talk” slowly Bolvaark walked towards the dead end at the back of the alleyway, their bodies slowly fading into thin air. Before disappearing completely the demon glanced back towards where the van had recently disappeared from… they knew who he was, and he no longer had any use for them… with his free hand he produced a small remote from a pocket and pressed the only button it had. From the distance an explosion rocked the buildings around... They wouldn’t be telling anyone about this.

Edited by: Despair Incarnate at: 10/12/06 12:43 am
gunfielddan

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(11/11/05 2:40 am)
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no i'm not stamping my own bio, just trying to get a sig working again

Forgotten Love



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(11/11/05 5:51 am)
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I'm sure everyone will hold off due to my involvement here. I have a few minutes just to see and save any new posts and I saw this so since Ill be unsure of my time online over the next few days (weekend outings with Ruby, a cousin, blah) so I'll just mention everything in the bio regarding Cole has been read and agreed upon by me!

If I swing by tonight I'll read over the entire thing and give my yay or nay, sorry I can't do it now!!

0x Tempest x0

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(11/20/05 6:20 pm)
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Riiight, so let's finally do this! You've been waiting long enough...

So this despair-causing thing... is it something he can "switch off" or completely unconscious? Cos I'm just picturing judges and juries bursting into tears, committing suicide after some days of trial or whatever XD

History: I'd prefer if you toned down his fame a little. Cos NE's history is basically the same as our history, and have you ever heard of a Bolvaark? ;) So maybe if it's more of some "underground fame" among those that know demons exist etc.?

I think the rest should be alright actually. Obviously I can't say much about the part concerning Cole *nods*

..um...and you do realise that non-cannon characters don't need to have sample posts after your first bio, right? XD

*stamp*



There comes a time in everyone's life when we have to take over responsibility. The question remains whether there is also a time when we can get rid of it again.

Despair Incarnate

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(11/21/05 1:45 am)
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wow, i'm impressed... nothing major to change, you're slacking Matt :evil

ok, have edited the fame bit, though i did mean it as in the demon community, but didnt think i needed to explain that... still have done so.

o and the depressing is an unconsious thing, but unless he directs it it is not strong enough to make them wanna top themselves... though i'm pretty sure i mentioned that

and... you mean to say that for the last four characters i DIDNT NEED a bloody sample..... nice of you to tell me >:
lol

~Dan

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(11/21/05 4:47 am)
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Well... we loved ya samples so much that we decided to let you keep up the good work :evil

Anyway, Ann had some ideas and stuff and I'm not sure if she's talked with you all about that but I'll let her add her comment her so that she's heard and her ideas are pushed forward, they sounded good enough to me and I'd give my stamp for sure... but I'll let Ann have the honors *side steps flying objects Dan hurls at her* :D

Despair Incarnate

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(11/21/05 12:40 pm)
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it wasnt me throwing things, it was him... he made me do it :D

no no thats fine i can wait, its been six months since i started so whats another couple of days?? *fidgets impatiently whilst refreshing page to see if Ann has posted* ...dammit

ScottSummers13

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(11/21/05 3:13 pm)
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Re: Bolvaark
Ok so .....not often I suggest adding more powers to a char but here goes. When he is in a one to one situation with people using his powers on max (like in a torture situation) how about him being able to see the visions that his powers are causing, This doesnt mean that he can interfere or direct the visions, they come from the victims subconsciounce and are from what you said their worst case scenario.... But he could watch it playing out....like a film??



Despair Incarnate

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(11/22/05 2:10 am)
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Re: Bolvaark
wow, you almost make it seem as if we hadnt already discussed this in length over msn :p

*in extreemely fake voice* yea sure, that sounds a great power i hadnt already thought of, or spoken about to anyone about before... especially not you.

lol will add that in next, actually i have thought of something else i should have probably mentioned, about him not eating food, a minor detail though so it can probably be left out

MattMurdock69

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(11/22/05 2:16 am)
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Re: Bolvaark
soo dont eat See if i care! And critisise my spelling.....well there you may have cause. Anyway Stamp

Despair Incarnate

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(11/22/05 2:51 am)
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Re: Bolvaark
oooh, look, mr Murdoch... you two will be meeting soon mwahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha............



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