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Estee1981
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(3/19/06 10:06 pm)
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Episode 1: Tempted
Hope you like it. Let me know :)

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Estee

"It is not in the stars to hold our destiny, but in ourselves."
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~~Shakespeare

snoangel909
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(3/20/06 7:05 am)
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so good!
I just wanted to let you know how much I loved the new episode. I love the whole series, too, but this one was really good. There were times when I was yelling at my computer screen, but that is only because it was so good and that you have the characters down so well. I hope you have the time to write the next episode soon, because I am waiting on the edge of my seat to find out what happens next!

allie

yngyang21
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(3/20/06 3:14 pm)
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omg!!!
i LOOOOOOOOOOOOve it! im glad jake and ham are having problems but i'm also sad and angry... but as long as they end u together in th end.

it was really good and i can't wait for the next one... please update soon :)

Love Hangover 
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(3/23/06 1:43 am)
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episode 1
great episode. you put through a full range of emotions... I was happy, sad, angry. I hope hamilton wises up soon and goes back to jack. By the way i really like the scene with kate and jack, it was great to see them bond.

queenoftrouble
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(3/25/06 11:06 am)
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new episode
I LOVE the new episode!
I've been searching for good YA-fics forever and I'm so glad I found this site! I've read everything and they were all amazing =) You're really talented!
I can't wait to see what happens. Even though I do not love Hamilton at the moment ;)

Keep up the good work // Sandra

Estee1981
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(3/26/06 1:35 pm)
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I'm feeling the love.
Thanks for all the posts so far. You guys rock :)

Nefetiri 
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(3/26/06 4:02 pm)
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LOVED IT! Hands DOWN one of my Faves!
I love this whole storyline!
especially the whole Jake/Hamilton/Alyssa thing

For me I never believed that Jake and Hamilton would have never split up eventually, it was inevitable that they would break up
BUT I know that at some point they will get back together again
because BOTH of them need to explore other relationships with other people, to see what else is out there before finally realizing that they were meant to be each other's soulmates

I also really enjoyed the Jill and Jake dynamic, you made me like Jill even more than i already have.

I can't wait to see what happens Next!
Update more often and SOOOON!

PS. Is Jake getting a new Love Interest too? ( I hope so! )
or would she think that since she no longer has a reason to stay would she leave Rawley and transfer to a nearby school but as a Girl this time?

AGAIN I can't wait for the nest Episode!!!!
thanks for writing again!


http://www.thedollpalace.com

Exxotica
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(4/1/06 5:53 pm)
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=)
I loved it! I'm on the edge of my seat! I can't wait for the next one!

snowbear96
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(4/6/06 10:49 am)
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Re: =)
Thanks for posting a new chapter. I don't like Alyssa, Jake/Hamilton forever! lol. I miss Gwen. Can't wait for chapter 2. :D

:eek

SweetMisery793
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(4/11/06 1:09 pm)
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great episode!
Awesome episode, ladies. I HATE Hamilton's guts right now. Even though it's good that he "explores" his options before settling with Jake, it just pissed me off at how quickly he jumped at his first opportunity to be with someone else. He didn't even hesitate. I'm glad Jill was honest with how she felt about the situation..GO JILL!!!

But the Jake/Hamilton scenes were heartbreaking. You can definately feel both of them hurting (mainly Jake). I just hope they both snap out of it and realize they're meant for each other.

Thanks for another excellent episode guys. I'm patiently awaiting to see what happens next. Please keep us updated!!

shevsy1
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(4/16/06 11:22 pm)
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awesome
this was really great, thanks so much and keep it up!!!

DoubleL27
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(4/17/06 8:02 pm)
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Re: awesome
God, this was killer and heartbreaking for the Jake/Hamilton stuff which was really . Change sucks, every time and you can just feel how much it hurts both Jake and Hamilton. Hamilton is taking this chance half out of want, it seems to me, and half out of the feeling if he doesn't then he's not doing what Jake asked of him. And we all know the boy is still whipped when it comes to Jake.

They'll find their way back to each other eventually, they always do. But still, I had to sniffle a bit.

But they've been so Jahammer (to coin a bad name merge) for so long they really need to see who they are. Jake has built a whole life around Hamilton, which really isn't healthy. She needs to find herself, I think, as much as Hamilton needs to get the Aly bug out of his system.

Oh and I loved Kate's line about him really being his father's son. Especially as her husband once had a fling with Aly's mother. Should be interesting how it all pans out.

I loved the Nick/Charlie talk in the car. It was a definite awkward situation that just never goes well, but that was better than most of them. You could just feel the tension.

And the Sean/Jill/Scout issue. Why do I get the feeling that once again Sean's number is going to come up a little short when it comes to what he really wants? Possibly because for Sean it usually does. And Jill is not over Scout, not really.

I find Tyson's biases against Scout and Hamilton to be just as palatable as Scout's original one towards Tyson. The assumptions we make...interesting new character to have introduced.

Edited by: DoubleL27 at: 4/25/06 5:24 pm
gisellekeiko
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(4/24/06 9:36 am)
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Re: awesome
Good start. We needed a Jahammer break, and it only makes it sweeter when they eventually get back together.

As always good job. Great dose of teen angst, humour and humanity. Perfect execution.

More please.

astarlight13
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(4/30/06 11:28 pm)
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good
Tempted was so good! I love the alyssa/hamiliton/jake story line even though i know hamiliton and jake will get together soon. I can't wait until the next epsiode

aande
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(5/1/06 1:05 pm)
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Tempted
Loved the new epsiode and looking forward to the next one. I hope Jake gets a new love interest too.

astarlight13
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(5/4/06 3:28 am)
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P.S.
p.s. your 'other' fic is amazing. You guys have done an amazing job with the characters

Nefetiri 
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(5/26/06 5:36 am)
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MORE!
Please keep us updated!

Thank you!

Estee1981
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(5/28/06 12:29 pm)
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Re: update
I am in the process of packing up and moving, but I want to maybe set up a writer's blog so people will know when I am working on an episode. It is summer for me now so I will have the time (yay). The next episode is a little more than half done. It's a party episode so there is a lot happening in a little amount of time. Anyway, off to the boxes.

p.s. Thanks for all the supportive posts. It matters :)

Estee

"It is not in the stars to hold our destiny, but in ourselves."

~~Shakespeare

Nefetiri 
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(6/3/06 12:54 am)
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thanks for the update!
thank you for replying!

it's a great idea about the writer's blog!

do you have a live journal?
you could set it up there
and we can just friend you

Estee1981
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(6/12/06 6:38 pm)
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the blog is up
As promised...

New Beginnings Backyard

...here is the writer's blog I mentioned before. Hopefully I will write in it often :)

Later 8)
Estee

"It is not in the stars to hold our destiny, but in ourselves."

~~Shakespeare

Nefetiri 
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(9/2/06 10:37 pm)
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Update soon!
What's happening with this fic series?

Please update soon!

I hope that it will continue.

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