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Jinlo Halan
Player's Name: Chris
E-Mail: Prefer not to disclose
Other means of Contact: AIM - Karmac0de


Name: Jinlo Halan
Nickname: None as of yet
Code Name: None as of yet
Affiliation: Xaviers Institute - Student
Gender: Female
Age: 17
Birthday: 12/6/2005
Hair: Long Jet Black, reaches to back of ribs
Eyes: Ice blue
Mother: Alice - Deceased, Brain tumour (Made up)
Father: Matthew - Deceased, Killed in riot (Made up)

Physical Description: Jinlo has a pale skinned complexion that is due to a long blood line of slum dwellers, running through her mother's side of the family to which gives the impression that she has been kept out of natural light, to which is an extent to be true, with her family living within the core of hell's Kitchen, left completely overshadowed by the surrounding towering buildings. Her build for her height; 5'6" is near enough none existant, being that Jinlo carries the impression that she has been sevearly malnourished to which has left her with a somewhat skeletal figure, her natural female features, are to a point nearly non existant, her waist line although very slim carries little definition as it leads to her hips, which follow the contours of her skeletal frame, giving the base apearance, with little to no exageration or accentuation. Where as her chest carries a fair element in definition, however the definition is in proportion to her small frame.

Jinlo predominantly wears loose fitting clothes being that she does not see that she possesses any features that need exagerating or emphasised, not that she wants to, After her inncident with her old employer, Jinlo has become increasingly careful with what she wears, choosing loose and non flattering clothes to deter any advancements or second glances from males. Her attire usually consists of dark neutral tones of purple and red mixed with a predominantly black base. It could be said about Jinlo, that she would fall into a gothic social group, not only due to the the atire that she wears, but the downward spirals of dispair, that her experiences in life have lead her through. Jinlo's hair is often kept at it's natural form, freely lying loose and untied. It is on formal occasions however that her hair is tied back, usually into a ponytail.

However when required to, during training and more physically demanding missions she substitutes her usual attire for training robes similar to that seen with martial artists, being for it's loose fitting and freedom of movement, comprising of a grey tunic, with a pair of black combat trousers, as the training passes through the day the tunic is put aside, stripping down to a black sports vest.

In addion to her general apearnce and attire, Jinlo has a piercing in her left eyebrow, something that had been done when she was 17, opting for an air of rebelion to the average norm, as well as to draw attention of those who would look at her away from the rest of her body towards the peircing, allowing for many to avoid seeing the somewhat depressed visage that she carried though her facial expressions, seeing that such peircings were not too common at the time it posed as a point of curiosity.

Powers:
Jinlo's Powers are of a psychic / mental capacity. Yet despite the term that is used to categorise her abilities, she has little true psyker abilities. For example she is unable to read minds or control other's actions, her powers rest within the range of attacking the mind, inducing pain or death. Something of which leaves Jinlo at a reluctance to use her powers.

Her abilities are as follows.

Mind Shatter - Has really only came about for Jinlo once, to which it's apearance not only marked the fact that she was a mutant, but also the point in which she started to fear what she was capable of and what she could not control within her. The ability that came about with this power, involved a high level mental scream, to which incompacitates the victim causing them to writhe in pain, as their mind is filled with a constant screaming sensation, to which with prolonged exposure can cause the the mind to black out before eventually dieing. However her first encounter with this ability has left her shaken, to which she is not willing to comit to attempting to use the technique again, despite the fact that she carries such a potent power and her reluctance to use it, Jinlo is prey to those willing to use her and her powers to exact their schemes, either willingly or through force.

Nausia - A relatively defencive trait that Jinlo has also developed, is the ability to influence another's mind into beliving that the body is suffering from nausia, to which for the weaker willed, cause them to seak out a point of rest or relief. Jinlo has used this technique only once, in which was deployed in an attempt to allow her to break free from a persuing anti mutant activist

Empathy - Jinlo's mutant abilities, although have somewhat given her a destructive trait, she has a slight ability to read the thoughts and emotions of others around her. Empathy involves thoughts, feelings, and emotions, to which are not of Jinlo's own, even though her Empathic abilities are feable at best, the effects of their presence on Jinlo is taking it's toll, as her mind still comes to terms with the sudden change in her life, not willing to mentally accept the fact that she is able to read other's minds, to which Jinlo believes that the presence of this power is but a sign of insanity, as she feels that she is seeing and hearing things that she shouldn't.
(Right i know this is an over stated power, the Empathy, but i do not intend for it to be used as a power, more of a character device, being that the abilities are having a dire effect on her state of mind)

History:

Born into a long line of Slum dwellers in the underbelly of 'Hell's Kitchen', New York. Jinlo had lived a rather fortuante life considering the harsh life that is burdened on many of those who dwell in the disease ridden streets around her. The fortunate life had granted Jinlo with a beatiful and tender nature towards her parents and the family's close friends and neighbours, however this kind nature of hers slowly started to demise when news came of her father Matthew's murder when she was the age of 15, her father being murdered in the middle of a biker gang riot

Jinlo's dispair spiraled into darker depths, she had became cold to the outside world, she rarely left the sanctity of her home, she had grown to despise the world for what it was and all the troubles that they faced were ignored by the masses who dwelled in the towering buildings that reached out towards the sky. The coldness became apparant to her peers, as she slowly drifted into social isolation, forsaking her former friends for solitude,she felt that her friends wouldn't understand what she was going through, seeing that she could find little support from her peers was the deciding factor to why she drifted away from them, perfering the solitude and isolation of being a 'loner'.

The social exclusion eventually started to progress to a heightened level, Jinlo started to deliberately avoid her school lessons, no longer wanting to socialise with her already distant peers. Her time away from school manifested from the odd day every week to entire month long stretches, right up until the point that she just cut off from the outside world, locking herself away in her own room. Her mother although aware of Jinlo's actions was essentially powerless to stop her from staying at home, as the burden of having to be the bread winner for the house hold fell solely onto her, to which led to long and endless shifts from dawn to dusk, just in order to be able to ensure a roof over their heads and food on the table, with the barely minimum wages that the laundrette payed it's staff.

It wasn't until the age of 17 that Jinlo had to venture out into the depths of New York's underworld, when Her mother Alice fell terminally ill, knowing that she needed to ensure the safehold of the family home from the gang owners who rent out the homes at extorsionate rates as well as providing a means of sustainance for both her and her mother.

Through all the run of ill luck it came as a supprise to Jinlo that she had managed to land a Waitressing Job in the entertainment district near the slums in which she resided in, the pay was enough to cover the rent, and the manager, Raj Seamul, had allowed her to take home the overcook at the end of the tireless nights, whilst saving the remaining wages and the occasional generous tips for the occasional luxuries that brought a light releif to her and her mother. For a further year and a half the continous patterns of near constant working and caring for her mother drawn on with little hope insight for a change in fortune for the downtrodden pair.

Nearing halfway through her 18th year her mother's illness claimed her life, the tumour spread through out her brain, the speed inwhich her mother's final demise fell came to a shock to Jinlo, who wanted to lock herself away with in the house and let the darkness surround her.Knowing that she had no remaining family to console in, as many of her parent's family were either dead, or had managed to make they way free from the troublesum life that Hell's Kitchen brought upon it's dwellers. However Jinlo realised that she could not hide herself away in her home alone, she needed to continue working to ensure a steady income to keep up with the payments to the local biker gang, who owned the house, being the case that neither of her parents were able to leave much of a inheritance, other than small trinkets.

Within days of her mother's funeral Jinlo resumed work at the resturant with her understanding boss, Raj Seamul, ubeknownst to her that Raj had a much sinister motive towards Jinlo.

Around a year after her mother's death, Jinlo's fortunes had changed little, she was still working long dwindling hours at the resturant, and with the past demise of the local law enforcement more and more unsavory characters were decending on area after waiting for the gangs to reach a point of stability, the resturant had become a tiresome place to work with more and more drunken rowdy customers flooding through the doors, each one giving promises of healthy tips for services outside of the confines of the resturant, which Jinlo blankly refused, and often stormed out of the resturant for, her manager with every sign of compassion and sympathy shown towards Jinlo, contemplated darker and sinister fantasies about Her.

It was not until one night, after the closing show of a popular and sucessful run a low budget musical that the resturant was over run with the cast and crew, all the staff were called in, Jinlo who was designated for a night off was also helping with the enslaught dealing with a very drunk and ambiguous crowd, leering and jeering at her and the other female waitresses. On passing one of the tables where some of the backing cast were sat, she was propositioned in the usual manner that she had became used to from the past few months, flatly refusing, one of the cast members tried to grab her, acting in self defence she slapped the customer hard accross the face, leaving an almost instantainious purple swelling over the cast members face.

In a furious uproar the Cast member demanded to see the manger, and was threatening to have her sacked, for what she did, the manager upon hearing the fuss aproached the group, noticing the trembling Jinlo cradling her hand she used to protect her self with. A sinister Smirk spreading on his face, the manager assured that Jinlo would be delt with severly for her actions, a look of shock fell upon her face, the caring image of her employer torn away within in instant to reveal the image of a cold and pityless shell of a person,

Raj, grabbed Jinlo by her left arm and dragged her through the resturant, filled with workers and customers glaring at her, as if she commited the ultimate taboo before leading Jinlo to his office. After a lenghly explanation, Raj seemed to show understanding to her, unbeknownst to her it was merely a form of deception to lull her into a sense of false security. Offering his open arms in a faked attempt to comfort her, Jinlo felt herself drawn into the secure comforting embrace, the illusion was shattered when he suddenly jolted his entire body, forcing Jinlo against the wall, shock ran over her entire mind at the realiseation that he was forcing himself upon her,

Jinlo's attempts to resist and breakfree were feable in comparison to the man's vice like grip, writhing in futile resistance, Jinlo tried to scream but found her entire body was shutting itself off from the outside world, all her senses becomming numb, her mind numb to the fact of her employer forcing himself upon her, All she could see was electric blue bolts of lightning running along the vein's in her eye lids, her entire body felt like it was about to burst through the skin, pain and anger was coarsing through her veins she could feel an unearthly power tear through her. The pain reaching it's mortal peak, all her external senses of came flooding back into conciousness, as she felt the grip of her employer instantainiously being cut loose from her as she watched him writhe on the floor in agony, his head burried in his arms. Watching as the managed thrashed about as if the pain was so intense and acute that the world narrowed into a warped tunnel vision. Slowly that tunnel grew more and more narrow as unconciousness and eventually death taken it's grip on the man.

Shivering, with fear and shock Jinlo slowly walked towards the crumbled heap of her employer confirming her worst fears, his body lay limp on the floor his face contorted into a horrific display of intense pain. The next few hours passed within a blur of emotion and almost heightend madness, making no attempt to call for aid Jinlo ran out of the back door of the resturant, before running to the local transit that would take her down to the Slums where she lived.

Reaching her home she rushed frantically through the house gathering her most treasured belongings and memories before packing them into a holdal, Without a second thought she gathered her reamian cash and stuffed it into the overflowing holdal, passing through her front door, her mind was a complete buzz with so many questions that she can not answer, but she knew there was one thing she would have to answer to, and that was her employer's murder.

Taking one final look at the home she had known since her birth, she uttered a wispered message to her parents who she always belived were watching over her, " I am so sorry, i have disapointed you" her voice trembling as crystal clear tears ran down her pale face. Turning her back on the house, she knew she could never go back, the police would be able to trace where she lived, and it was likely that the biker gang would clear out her house and rent it out to another, once they noticed it wasn't inhabitied for a few days,

Having no home and no possible future other than jail, Jinlo could think of nothing that can offer her salvation, She set off into the streets of new york, tears dripping from her face, before being caught in her clothes, torn from her late manager's advancements.

Personality:

Jinlo despite often coming across as slightly distant, is very intuitive and has an aptitude for extraordinary assimilation of knowledge and data recall, empathy. She has been known to make statements, sometimes cryptic and sometimes direct. Sometimes her statements are hard to decipher because she talks in a way that she understands but others have difficulty comprehending. During her free time Jinlo is very focused on her training and her studies, longing to master her abilities withough causing harm to others and as a result is often seen hiding her face behind a book or journal as her mind digests the information contained within.

Jinlo has always had a deep and caring nature for loved ones and generally those around her as well as concern for those who are unfortunate, this nature was shaken and became none existant after her incident with her former employer. To which the incident has lead to a great distrust of males in general, to which she is often careful not to let her guard down around men, incase such an incident happed again, as of which makes Jinlo apear very fearful and suspicious towards the men around her.

With regards to her powers Jinlo is very self doubting over her abilities, being that she is not wanting to harm any one and still comming to terms with what has happened to her and the destructive potential that she wields, from witnessing Raj Seamul; her former employ, die in writing agony infront of her eyes.

Medical Profile: It is apparant to those around her that Jinlo is finding it hard to cope or even come to terms with things that have changed her life completely, From her Former employer's attempt to rape her to the emotional torture that she inflicts upon herself because of the act of murder she had commited, something that is completely against her character, along with her inability to come to terms with what is happening around her.

In addition to the rise in in the turmoil that runs through her mind Jinlo had been marked for suicide watch more or less from day one within Xaviers Institute. Her Initial medical profiling was more colourful than most of the student body within the institute, to which an increase and addition to her already known symptoms was brought on by minimal signs of an empathy ability taking form yet it's potentcy being so minute it was negated the medical team in institute saw that Jinlo was potentially close to a mental breakdown. A breakdown that is likely to brought on by Jinlo becomming too overwhelmed in what is happening to her.

Medical notes on Paranoid Schizophrenia:
One of the most damaging of all mental disorders that causes its victims to lose touch with reality. They often begin to hear, see, or feel things that aren't really there (hallucinations) or become convinced of things that simply aren't true (delusions). In the paranoid form of this disorder, they develop delusions of persecution or personal grandeur. The first signs of paranoid schizophrenia usually surface between the ages of 15 and 34. There is no cure, but the disorder can be controlled with medications.


Likes:
To read, Jinlo has a fondness for digesting information contained in all forms of media, it is a light belief that she wishes to better herself knowing that if she let her mind or sense's slip she may end up harming another like her former employer, Raj Seamul.

Dislikes:
Jinlo's confidence has been greatly shaken as of recent events in her life. She has little trust in males, following on from Raj's attempted rape. Yet she has little trust in the world around her, being that the past few years she has only seen death and suffering within her family and her life, to which has lead to a slightly cinical outlook.

Sample Post:

After several days of endless walking with little rest or food, Jinlo set down against the fence railings that surrounded the perimiter of a large collection of buildings that looked more like a stately home or palace, yet having spent her entire life in Hell's Kitchen any thing larger than a shack was a palace in Jinlo's eyes. Deciding to take a short rest before continuing with her flight from the city and the law, Jinlo rumaged through her back pack looking for what little traces of food that she may have had left still. After several minutes of frantic and repetative searching, Jinlo resigned and conceaded to hunger, lurching her head backwards she rested the back of her head within the gaps between the railings. Her gaze eventually shifting towards the large structure sat at the core of the permiter, illuminated in the warming glow of the morning's dawn.

Staring out accross the long winding lawns and gardens that spiraled out from the building, Jinlo's eyes scanned over the windows watching as the lights behind the curtains slowly came to life, as the occupants of the buildings emerged from their sleep and made their preparations for the new day ahead of them. Deep down Jinlo envied the occupants of what she guessed was a boarding school, their lifes were undoubtedly far greater than hers. Jinlo's quiet musings on the life beyond the railings were broken short as passing postman stopped close by to clear out the letters from the near by mail box. "You don't wanta be staring there too long" The post man spoke, his tone almost devoid of any sense, the yearly drawings of a mundain task seemingly numbing the persons vocabulary. "That pace is full o' freaks, you'd best not linger too long unless you want to be their prey" The post man continued as he emptied out the mail box of it's contents, his gaze connecting with Jinlo's before nodding at the shear look of fear and horror on her face.

Taking a few steps closer towards Jinlo the postman set his bag on the floor before crouching down close to Jinlo, the look on Jinlo's face was full of fear and panic as the proverbial stranger knelt down beside her. "Here, you ain't looking tae well why don't you come with me and we'll go find you some help from a copper" The postman offered, in what sounded like a grunt as he tried to keep his balance, on the balls of his feet. The reaction on Jinlo's part was not what the postman, despite his good intentions were not what he had expected. As Jinlo frantically tried to scramble away from the postman, the fact that the postman was too close to her for comfort coupled with the offer to find aid from a police officer, something that would be the last item on her list of priorities, she had commited murder, she was not likely to be handing herself into the police any time soon.

"Woah woah, calm down luv, i'm helping ya" The postman reasoned as Jinlo's sprawling caught him off guard, being that it was not the reaction he was expecting, however he could not of expected what had happened, as Jinlo kicked out at the postman's face, the whole statement, calm down luv setting off the alarm bells within Jinlo's mind, which intensified as the postman moved to what she saw as an attempt to restrain her. As the postman buckled over backwards stunned from the kick to his face, Jinlo frantically gathered her scattered belongings, before scrambling to her feet and running as far and as fast as her tired and fatiqued legs could move.

Rounding the corner at the end of the road Jinlo continued down the path shortly before comming to a standstill at what seemed to be the main driveway to the complex, looking behind her she could see that postman was drawing close, blood tricking down from his cut lip. Unsure of what the man wanted with her, Jinlo looked about trying to figure out what she was going to do now. Looking towards the complex, Jinlo figured she would take her chances with the so called freaks, seeing it would be a better escape than what the postman would have instore for her. Without a second thought Jinlo ran and threw herself against the gate, each time she connected with the gate, sharp pains shot through her body eminating from her now redened arms, yet the gate shown no signs of budging, on what was to be her final attempt the gate gave way with a dull buzzing sound.

Stumbling forward, Jinlo picked herself up, before turning to the gate and slamming it shut, even if the gate was broken it would atleast buy her some time, if the postman had chosen to brave the rumours that he had heard and chose to spread. Running down the long winding gravel path, Jinlo felt her feet give way benief her, before falling head long into the grit like gravel, cutting and grazing her skin. Despite wincing initially at the pain, Jinlo scrambled to her feet and continued running, knowing that what ever she had just suffered from the gravel would be nothing in comparision to what the persuer would do to her if he caught her. Yet unknown to her the post man had called off his persuit, not wanting to risk what lay beyond the fence railings.

Throwing herself up the steps leading to the front door, Jinlo took a few more weiry steps before colapsing agaist the large oak doors, despite nearing passing out from exhaustion and hunger Jinlo used what ever strengh she had to knock at the front doors of the institute, her entire body aching from fatique and the pain of her hands conecting against the wood,Jinlo's continual knocking at the front door started to subdue. Falling limp against the door, she could feel that her voice had became hoarse, without even realising she had started screaming "Someone help me!" in frustation, as she hammered against the door with what little strength she had left.



Edited by: Plebometer at: 3/26/07 10:12 am
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(4/22/06 3:16 pm)
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Hiya....the avatar power is identical to the astral projection power used by my Michael char and also to that of Peyson Halliwell whose bio is being worked on at the moment in the applications section sooo ............someone else with it would really be overkill. Any chance you could rethink that one??

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(4/22/06 4:31 pm)
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erm sure,

May omit that section thinking about it, being that this character is more or less translated from the starwars board i work at, to which the avatar is one of that character's founding abilities.

If ok with you guys can i make that Mind shatter her prime power, as it may poise to become a potential plot line, Anti human faction kidnapps her or that, and attempts to force her to use that power to kill off a load of humans, (similar scenario to magneto's plan in the first x men movie)

See if it helps am intending on having Jinlo's character be very self doubting over her abilities, being not wanting to harm any one and still comming to terms with what has happened to her. She's a character who is plagued with downfall.

EDIT ::.. Have removed the Avatar bit, altered a few minor details and such



Edited by: Jinlo Halan at: 4/22/06 5:17 pm
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(5/10/06 12:24 am)
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OK ......and sorry for the long absence... real Life.. what can I say! Soooo Would like a longer history... her friends if any. Her relationship to guys.... Any other family out there.... and.... from a purely selfish point of view....does she live anywhere near hells kitchen?Cos that is a really bad part of new york.... and i play Daredevil! 8)

In the sample post .... what are casts?Hangs head at lack of understanding! Hey Im british and old.... be kind!

Edited by: Fengal at: 5/10/06 12:29 am
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Awww, I'm british too, but having a mid life crisis at 21 lol

Will take a stab at the changes and hopefully should be okies for u

The Cast - Are those within a production, so it would be principle actors, back ground actors extra's and crews such as lighting and sound etc



Edited by: Plebometer at: 5/10/06 7:42 pm
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(5/16/06 7:47 am)
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Firstly, welcome back and all Chris.

You're tending to come and go, are you sure you're able to stick to this charrie? It's sad seeing you build up a charrie and then get swamped with things and have to keep leaving. Also, be sure if you do leave again that you leave a message, just so we know if you're gone or not and if you intend to return.. this allows us to be certain on your where abouts and if we should keep or remove your character profiles from the bio sections. I don't remember if yours have been moved or not but every few months I do try to do a clean up and it's been a while since you last posted with Taki!

Empathy can't really be allowed, simply because we already have a few with it, who use it as a big aspect of their character.. allowing it as a 'RP tool' could result in problems with us later down the track when someone else wants the same previlige and we're not happy giving it but may feel inclined simply because we allowed it once.

The 'I hear voices and I'm insane' routine is also a tad on the over board side of thigns as well. we have one character who's a telepath and is being driven insane by that, amongst other things. Plus there's Talia, who hears whispers of other peoples minds, though she's not insane at all, just socially withdrawn. And then there's Spike, who's insane (or though he can seem sane at times!) and he hears voices.. sees things.. all that jazz.

So, she'd not exactly be a rare case, you may want to go with something more unique, up to you in the end. Either way, her powers will not go unnoticed for long, on top of it being a mutant school, there fore telepaths are around to check on her mind, but there's also the odd mutant here and there who can actually 'read' the mutant gene, Connor for example could instantly tell she has empathy, amongst her other powers.

If someone hears voices and is a mutant, hank will definitely make sure that those voices are mental issues opposed to mutant ones, and he will go out of his way to check it out and find the source and wouldn't be satisfied till he was sure of the result.

I'm really tired... so I hope that made sense lol.

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(5/16/06 5:53 pm)
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Mmm well i'm looking to make a more durable commitance to the rping here, i think i was kinda left waiting for a post and then gradually gave up on the wait, being that i think you guys are using the single local rp system, that and being marked up as a bio mod on the other starwars forum was the clinching factor in which i was pealed away to Unforeseen Destiny till now. But i think i did swing by after an email was sent with regards to a roll call to fill u guys in, cannie mind to be honest, have the memory of a fish....

But Yah moving on, Can easilly remove the empathy elements, as i think i stated earlier along the lines, the character is a translation of the verson i play as on the other board, however the original version has tonned herself down, *bloody Jedi* as of which left the old neurotic ness of the Character to obsqurity, something that i feel was a waste being that i tfound it more enjoyable and challenging to rp her as a neurotic mess.

Although the Isanity is not really a fair comment towards her character, although it had came accross as that, it is more due to a mental breakdown, being the sudden change that had been brought on by the x gene revealing it'self, to which her mind is still to catch up to. So once her mind comes to terms with things she'd be less neurotic.

Although from what had played out with the character before hand was that most of her problems originated because of her fear, with regards to herself, being that she doesn't want to harm people, yet she is landed with such destructive abilities, something that had caused her to be a wee bit conciencious and loner ish.

So basically it is a long haul for her character, with the intial shock of comming to terms with the past incident's (rape murder etc), then the fact she's a mutant, overcoming her fear of her powers , and that sort of long winded plot details.

If your interested or curious as to what i mean i could link you to some past rps done with this character, to let you get the general idea..

..:EDIT:.. Have tweeked the medical profile so that it just explains that she is close to a mental breakdown, she be in a very fragile state at the moment



Edited by: Plebometer at: 5/16/06 8:08 pm
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Haha. Everyone has 'reasons' as to why they become unstable, usually it is a chaotic event that does it ;)
Ok, as I said, it is up to you, unless two admins voice their comments against it then you do have a choice to keep it or not, just thought I'd make it clear that it is getting rather common, in case you wanted to have a unique twist (so you don't join and then realize that someone else had the same idea, just like warning people!) ^_~

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Okies thanks for that, i'll think i would stay her proposed state, as from experience it opened alot of doors to her, and proved to be a fairly challenging character not only for myself but for the others who had to interact with the distraught mess ;)



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Hate to be annoying, but what is the character's status


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(6/11/06 4:59 am)
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ah, a good prod helps, sorry Chris, I had waited for someone else who commented to say you had done as they asked and then got entirely distracted from the bio.

You replied to all my comments that I could see, so that gives you a; *stamp* from my end of things! two more.

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(6/21/06 1:51 pm)
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This looks fine now and if Angie is ok with the powers then so am I..... one thing about the sample post though , dont panic just me with my head of security hat on:D Those gates are big... and there is a manned security box at the entrance.... so they would be opening as soon as she started throwing herself at them... not that she'd necessarily have noticed though...... just thought id mention it.

Ohhh and please please.... could you not post your speach in blue... i find it soooo hard to read.......have to highlight it all the time to see whats written!

Apart from that

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Hrmm K i'll remember to keep the speech colourless :rollin


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Ah, I see you've satisfied all the requirements. Don't worry, it gets easier to get accepted after you go through the process a couple of times. ^_^ Anywho, I believe this is the last stamp that you needed! *Stamp!* Welcome to NE! You can post at anytime. If people aren't speedy about showin' up, nag us in the Thread Participation Request section, k?

Have fun!
-Katie



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Re: Jinlo Halan
:D Weeeeee Thankies every one..

Have another year at uni to throw myself back into the thick of the board once again ...

I'll get an opening thread posted up at the academy ...


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