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LunaSoliel
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(1/3/06 6:16 pm)
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Lake of Fire (Original Story)
Prologue:

The ashy clouds billowed darker today, as if sensing the angst that hung in the air. They mirrored the emotions of that of Ember Andarkus: Princess of the Fire Lands. This day was dark for her. What happened just twelve short years ago echoed through her mind. Her blood curdling scream, her lover squirming in agony as the venom ripped through him like a knife.

She sat in the rocky fields and watched the black stallions trot by, rider less. The only thing they had to worry about were doing what their riders told them to do, and staying alive. They had similarities to her: bound to their masters for life, having a small chance at love, baring offspring but knowing that it will never be completely theirs.

Ember looked up at the distant tower in the castle she called home. Her daughter Sorenica played in her room at the top, oblivious to the importance of this day. But she needed this child-like ignorance to stay a child. Ember didn’t want her child to grow up too fast and cut short the childhood that Ember never had.

A serpent slithered between the rocks towards its prey. Ember didn’t need to turn around to know what it was.

“I always knew it was you.” She said coldly, emotionless.

The serpent made its way to face Ember, who gave it a hard look.

“You killed him, now you’re about to kill me. You’ll never kill her though. You’ll pamper her and spoil her until it happens. Then you’ll use her; she’s your key: the key to your ultimate power.” If it had been a normal serpent, she could incinerate it from the inside out, but this was no ordinary snake.

The serpent’s eyes narrowed in anger. It lashed out at the young maiden and latched on to her leg, pumping venom through her system. Her vision grew dark, until she felt nothing, and slipped away.

Unbeknownst to the serpent was the daughter that just saw her mother being murdered by her own blood.

LunaSoliel
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(1/3/06 9:17 pm)
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Re: Lake of Fire (Original Story)
Chapter One –

Sorenica sat bolt upright in her bed, after having another nightmare. She had them often, and they were all about the same thing: the death of her mother. It had only been five years since the events of that day, but the memories were fresh in Sorenica’s mind. She reached out and ignited the candle on her nightstand. Her birthday was approaching in a week, which meant she had to leave; fast. She had planned on escaping her servitude later today, but figured that this would be the best time if any.

Sorenica crept out of bed and gathered her things. All of her necessities fit into one bag that slung over her shoulder. She reached into her nightstand and took out a brown book with the initials: EIA engraved on them. It was her mother’s diary from when she was a child and all through her teen years.
       
        Putting it in her bag carefully, Sorenica tiptoed to her heavy door. She was afraid to open it, fearful of the loud creaking it would make. Sighing, she pulled at the handle and opened the door just enough for her to slip through. She shut it as quietly as possible, but a creak cranked from the hinges. Her heart was beating incredibly fast, her adrenalin pumping.

She scampered down dark corridor and down a flight of stairs. The castle was huge, and daylight was coming soon. She started to take the quickest route to the front entrance, but soon remembered that it would be guarded. She took a left and went in the opposite direction towards a back entrance to the castle that few knew about. Her mother had told her about it once right before she died. (“If you ever are in any trouble or need to escape, use this passage. It’ll lead you straight onto the grounds,”) she had said. It left little Sorenica utterly confused, but she was glad for the information tonight.

Two flights of stairs, three rights, and two lefts later, Sorenica came to a dead end wall. Sighing, she racked her brain for what to do next. (“Here, take your palm to the stone. Burn an imprint onto the wall. There that’s it,”) the wall morphed into a wooden door! Nodding to herself, Sorenica mimicked what her memory told her to do. The stone came to life as it were and became a door. She hurriedly stepped through and found herself in the northern eastern grounds. The jungle of thorns and vines was in her sight, and she quickened her pace towards it.

“Where are you going Sorenica?” A low voice called out behind her.

She halted in her tracks, and slowly turned around.

“Taran…”

He was Taran Rothrock, descendant of a great warrior. She had had a child-crush on him when she was thirteen. He gave her, her first kiss (a sloppy and embarrassing one too). They liked each other, everyone knew. But he distanced himself from her after the kiss. Not speaking a word to her unless he absolutely had to. She never knew why.

“How do you know about this entrance?”

“Your grandfather told me about it a little over a year ago. I’ve been guarding it every night since then.”

She let the words sink in.

“You know I’ll have to take you back. I’ll forget all about this if you come quietly.”

“Why do you have to be this way? If I leave now I’ll have a about an hour’s head start. You can say that you didn’t see me or that I went another way; anything you want but please, let me go,” she pleaded.

“Your palm print is still on the wall. He’ll know you came this way; and if he finds out I let you go, he’ll kill me. And I don’t know about you, but I value my life. I have my family honor to uphold.”

“Is that why you stopped talking to me: your honor?”

“That, and a few other things…” Lights were being ignited in the castle, signaling that he was awake and searching for her.

“If you ever felt anything for me, you’d let me go!” She continued to plea.

He flinched at her words; it was a low blow for him.

“You’d like that wouldn’t you? To cloud my judgment for feelings that I lost long ago. It’s not going to work.” He scoffed. The lights got closer and closer to the ground floor.

“Don’t make me do this.” Tears formed in her eyes; she didn’t want to hurt him.

        He stood rooted in his spot.

        Sorenica closed her eyes and let her energy move through her, the heat building inside of her. She focused on his left arm, the arm that held his shield, not his sword. It erupted in flames and he cried out in pain.

        “I’m sorry…” She turned around and ran into the forest of thorns; hoping to never see these grounds again.

LunaSoliel
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(1/3/06 9:17 pm)
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Re: Lake of Fire (Original Story)
Chapter Two –

He marched down that last flight of stairs toward his destination. He found her small palm print burned into the wall. Sighing in anger he pressed his own hand against the wall and through open the new door that appeared.

Outside he found Taran; his left arm in flames. He shook his head and extinguished the flames with his mind and stood there and watched the young boy wither in pain. He glared at Taran, who failed at his duty. His scars will forever remind him of the dishonor that chanced on this night. It was a sentence worse than death.

“I-I’m sorry sir…” He was clearly frightened by the man that hovered above him. “She just…She just…” He was too afraid to speak.

“Surely you could stop a defenseless little girl?” The man crouched down and got in Taran’s face. “Do you not remember the day I promised you power? She has three weeks. Three weeks until it is complete. If you were to keep her here until then I’d give you the power you seek. But no, you let a naïve little girl escape your grasp. Pathetic. Just like your father.” His words twisted with deceit and greed. “And now, you’ll have the evidence for all to see of your incompetence.” The man stood up and looked at the forest of thorns and weeds.

“Please sir, give me one more chance. I’ll gather the troops and we’ll comb through the woods. I will not rest until I find her, nor will the men. Please. She isn’t that far ahead, she doesn’t know where she’s going…” He began plead.

“Oh yes she does. She’s known for quite some time, this is just her first chance to act on it.” He said vaguely turning back to Taran.

“Please my King, once more chance,” Taran begged.

The King’s eyes flickered at him. He couldn’t stop the inevitable, for what was going to come. But he needed her back in the Fire Lands when it happened.

“Very well. Gather the troops and have them ready at dawn. Spread them out so they’ll cover more ground.” Taran nodded and quickly got up.

“Thank you my King.” He bowed and showered the King in thanks. Taran hurried off to the stables to get the horses ready.

The King gazed out at the thorns one last time before heading back inside the castle to get ready.


        Sorenica hurried her pace through the thick jungle of dead trees and weeds. She walked in random directions for some time, not sure where to go. She had seen the maps of the Fire Lands as a child; it was so big and confusing to her. But somehow she found an old path that seemed to lead to somewhere. She followed all of its twists and turns, blindly hoping it would lead her to safety.

        The dawning sun could barely be seen now, which motivated her to move faster. She running now, becoming a blur ducking under the dead branches. She halted in her tracks when she reached her destination: the boundary between the Fire Lands and the Great Forest, the thing that separated the other half of her heritage.

The sight before her was beautiful. It was so green and fresh. But the ditch in the ground stopped her from going any farther. An old willow tree was rooted just at the edge as if wanting to go over, but to afraid to do so. She rooted through her bag and brought out her mothers diary, to see if this was the right place. Sorenica leafed through the weathered pages until she found the one she was looking for.

Today I ventured out to the boundary. I knew it was dangerous for I did not know what lurked in the sector of the forest. Father told me many stories of vicious creatures who were half-goat, half-human. Or worse, they climbed in trees and cater-walled to each other in a language I did not understand. But still I persisted to the boundary out of my own curiosity. When I got there, there was a young boy about my age playing in the strange green grass. He seemed to be TALKING to an animal! It was the strangest thing. I called out to the boy, "Hello?" in my native tongue, hoping he'd understand me. To my surprise he answered!

"Hi..." He said meekly. My sooted appearance and my dark eyes and hair must’ve startled him. For he looked at me with my own matched curiosity.

"If you don't mind me asking, are you talking to that animal?" I asked.

"That animal is a squirrel." He corrected. "And yes I was talking to him." He seemed to have a different personality than the ones I was used to back home. I still had not crossed the boundary, for fear of what would happen if I did so.

I nodded, "Oh ok...Whats your name? And why are you this close to the boundary? You know its dangerous." I explained.

"Might I ask you the same questions?" He responded vaguely. He wasn't afraid of me, but cautionate towards me. I knew he wouldn't say anything until I did.

"Ember Andarkus." I stated. His eyes grew wide.

"The Andarkus?"

"Yes of course. How many of them are there?" I asked. "Your turn."

"Soren Geolith."

"Well Soren, what are you doing at the boundary." He didn't seem to want to test my patience now.

"I was curious, plus I heard the crying of this small squirrel." He gestured to the small gray animal.

"I guess we have something in common. I too was curious." He seemed to think that was funny, for he chuckled to himself. He glanced around his shoulder quickly as if hearing something I could not.

"I have to go. It was nice meeting you Ember." He scooped up the animal in his arms and turned and ran into the green forest and out of sight. It was the weirdest experience I have ever had. He looked different than the people in the Fire Lands. He had brown hair, instead of black or red, and his eyes were light brown, sort of like cinnamon. He smiled a lot too. Something else I noticed about him...He was sarcastic, but not cynical. Something else that was different of the Fire Land people. He was an enigma that that I wanted to discover. I hope to see him again...


        Sorenica smiled at her mother’s words. Her mother was only eleven years old when she wrote that entry, her father was twelve. So young they were, so naïve. Knowing but not knowing the consequences of their meeting. Sorenica put the diary away and looked at the boundary; the only to cross it was to jump. Backing up a few feet, Sorenica ran towards the ditch and leapt across it in blind faith…

Back at the castle, the King gave the call for the troops to be sent out to hunt down his granddaughter…

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